Birthday boy setting.
It was a dazzling morning where the sun was glowing bright in the sky in 1951 in Korea. The village was deserted and the ground was dusty just like an old cupboard that hasn't been cleaned in years, the houses were filled with bits and pieces of airplane parts and mammoth tank parts.
2 comments:
Talofa lava Eden, I like the way you write your setting and I can just read on and on. I had written one, but on a different story.
How do you think about your writing?
Talofa lava Eden, I like the way you described the setting and how the day was. Hope you are going to do anyone like this because I could just read on and on. How do you think your writing is?
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